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ania : I am workin on my comercial.But i think i will have litle time for this too... WToreK , i will put lot of work on this.Hope you will be here for crutiqes:) TO ADMINISTRATORS : PLEASE MOVE MY THREAD TO WIP

i decided to make my car A HELL OF A PROJECT... Wanna make it perfect...So i started with part1 - part of weapon for the car.

In maya you can not combine objects with diferent normals direction... surface normals always have to point out...but there are cases when they have to point in - when making skydome.... There were few more things that i just can't remember right now...

I have never payed atention to this.I am sure it is simple but... I wanna know why is important the direction of a surface normals when it comes to lighting.Don't get me wrong.I know why is important for modeling but for lighting???

Nice job man.What software did you use?

Tweety and Gedeon thanks a lot guys... By the way Tweety did you see the Nike comercial? I sent the link so you see it.I like to make my comercial with that NIKE STYLE. by the way what is that mrAreaSpot...I work maya Tweety

I used Mental Ray, but have to learn lighting more. If you can somehow help me in that direction please do it.After all i got 6-7 months in 3d.Still learning... Have lots of tutorials about lighting.Maybe u can tell me which one helped you most to master lighting.

Better RIMS?

Wow.Thanks man.You helped me a lot....

http://rapidshare.de/files/11469287/Nike_Basketball_Freestyle_Extended.avi.html

So guys what you think i should fix in this image so it becomes part of the Gallery?

alien111 THANKS hey guys ...I was just wondering... The golden Gallery is just for Polish people ???

I am sure you can find it on the net... I have it on my PC since 2003 i think...Don't know for sure...Always liked it and now will use it... If you know where i could upload 30 MB video tell me i will do it so you can see it..

Thanks for coments guys...But why do you say waiting for final version? I said next week i will send wire ,not other render.You got me wrong...This is FINAL...Yes it could be better but not now :)... Knysha I have sent this car before yes but that render sucked :) Thanks guys...Any crutiqes now that you know it is final?

Well , have you seen NIKE's comercial? Couple of NBA players make tricks with basketball and by the way that comercial has very good sound...I am using that one...just shortened of course.. I won't work more on mouth cause this will be dynamic animation..Characters moving all the time.So i think mouth is just ok..Anyway i won't zoom in the characters that much... And wich part of the mouth you don't like?UPER LIPS just or both LIPS...??? Check out the sound that i will put in my comercial.Will shorten it in Sound forge of course...Ok just check it out and tell me if you like it??? http://rapidshare.de/files/11453994/Nike_Basketball_Freestyle_Extended.mp3.html

OK GUYS HERE IS WIRE... Please crutiqe

Bro these days i am so busy i don't know where my head is... I had this car , but rendered bad.Tonight while sleeping i left it to render and got this... I got this comercial thing,got other small thing for a local TV... Sorry .... Expect wire and without materials next week...Ok BRo?

Black Death

Nice job so far Bro...

I could not send wire today cause my PC is rendering fluid effects since yesterday... Probably will do it tomorow... I was wondering what you guys think ...Can i make this in 3 months? Here is my idea: There is a phone on the ground.Camera goe towards it and rotates 360 around it.When it gets above it the phone starts to open(i want to make the phone something like SAMSUNG E 340, maybe custom design, will see). Camera zooms quickly in the phone's screen.Everything gets dark(only spotlight lightens the scene).In a sec you hear sound like someone is playing with basketball.From the dark Leo is coming with a basketball and starts making tricks.After that he passes the ball to another character he makes tricks too(i want the sound from NIKE's comercial...you know basket bamping all the time and players make tricks...)..After that there is another character that makes tricks(all characters dressed mostly in RED AND WHITE....all quite and cool)...At the end the third character passes the ball to LEO(the first character on page 1)...Leo lets the basketball fall on ground...The basketball turnes into the mobile phone from the first scene.After that litle text "MOBIMAK CONECTS YOUR WORLDS"... This is kinda DEMO..hehe...I can say that i guess.Guys cruticize and maybe give ideas please...

mr_marchew : Thanks for the advice i wil try it. Remedy : I want quick & dynamic animation Bro as you said.By the way all they said to me is : "Blast us with something...we trust you".Nothing more.My idea My all.... And by the way this was LOW POLY guys.Those ugly corners don't exist when smoothed.Will post you wire tomorow for crutiqes ok?

You are so right.But can't afford more polygons on my PC.Cause there will be also few mobile phones(or maybe one),i plan to make another character and scene for the whole thing.I have 3 months deadline so got to be carefull.Also at the end i will probably lose time on several renders untill it's perfect so.... If i make him details i will make it with textures.Not by adding more polygons. Thanks anyway Bro for tryin to help.I respect that...

Made some blendshapes.By the way this is LOW POLY version.Yea the nose sucks hard but when it's smoothed it is ok... Got to do more blendshapes(still thinkin if he would just make faces or talk)... If he talks i will have to record myself in a studio or get sounds from song or movie.And then make blendshapes for the sentences he will say. Still thinkin about it.While thinkin will start makin the scene.

Hey Remedy: The comercial is going to be for for MOBIMAK(#1 telephony operator in Macedonia-my country)...Still don't have clear image of what the final will look like...Got tones of ideas that need to be balanced with time.i have to use mostly Red and white.You can see the logo of the company on his hat. By the way i work in maya...Hope that is enough info man. I apreciate all advices,cause after all this is my first step in the biss...

mintrill : Yes it will be animated.So i try to make it as low poly as i can but still to keep it's hape... Knysha : I made a simple nose..wanna focus more on animation tweety : Agree with you...But it is just test render...By the way yes it is for TV... Any advices? Guys?Hello?