pradipta Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 HI, from my recent project. modeled in 3ds max6 and rendered in vray. waiting to see comments, a test render would like to receive comment on lighting and texturing thanks a lot for your time Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
AGmakonts Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 Hello! Wow, gr8 work, almost perfect lighting. Only connection of tarrace with wall is.... isn't good 5+/6 PS: Jeśli bardzo okaleczyłem język obcy to niech jakiś miły Mod to naprawi, prosze :) Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
chveti Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 3 Lipiec 2005 Hi, I see it's not scanline now like always ;) good lighting , for this small lamps (white points) try too add IES maps. don't like the floor reflection and wall shader (i think it isn't standart?). Scene is too empty but it's WiP...add any little trees , flowers...add some life for this scene , maybe some vector or rpc people. greets. Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
illy Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 It's a bit too clean. A bit to lifeless. A bit too cold. Try do bring some life to your scene. Make it a bit warmer and softener. It's clean that I it seems not real. Do some fog, dust or something. As for modeling you got the highest notes :) Looks good Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
Hindus Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Hi, didn't like the ground texture(parquet or smthg ?) and chairs on the left part of the image (imo they are to small) perhaps like lighting and design but theres a little bug on the top of image(left corner) - for this moment can give u 4stars ;) Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 thanks for all the feedback, agmakonts: thanks, i understand that. i will try to improve on that on my next render chveti: yes, for interior i started using vray now. ok, i tried IEs but never got satisfied result so i changed back to normal light. yes, i will ad some more objects to fill the space illly: thanks. i will work on those thnigs. hindus: yes, thanks for noticing the bug for me. i overlooked that. i will change the chair amd well, wall texture is bothering me alot. thanks for your time, Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 i am posting my next test render, thanks for any feedback Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
SansSerif Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 hey pradipta, really nice rendering of very interesting architecture. few tips: 1. do not use shitty rpc`s for such a nice shoot :) 2. if you use rpc check their scale vs chairs vs architecture 3. use camera correct modifier 4. never use pure white material because it always looks dirty (ceiling) 5. add color for skylight Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 thanks sansserif, i understand that. nice to see your detailed remarks. i dont have good RPC with me and i know i have to serously think about them now. Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
MaGuu Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 For me first picture was better :D as in first as in second render, lighting is good, very good. I'm keen on your style and this large staircase. Good work. Keep it up ;) Sorry for my mistakes :/ Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
chveti Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 look for the Zed's topic ...big hall...he's got vector humans in scene , people from photo sucks :P because you don't have on them good lighting etc.You can also try something like sansserif in his old scene , make LP people with standart shader without textures and details. greets. Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
SansSerif Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 yeah rpc was good solution 10 years ago ;) try this one http://www.lowpolygon3d.com/ Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 chveti: yes, that'd be nice. but that takes time also. i will try not to use RPC, it really sucks. whcih topic of Zed's? can you give me a link? Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 thanks sansserif, i am checking the link now. Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
AGmakonts Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 I think that reflections on the wall should be more blurry Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 4 Lipiec 2005 AGmakonts: may be. i will try with that. Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 7 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 7 Lipiec 2005 here is another update on this scene, will look for more feedback, Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 8 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 8 Lipiec 2005 hi, is there any more comments and feedback for me, thanks Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 8 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 8 Lipiec 2005 another render Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 is there any more comments for me, thanks Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
Hindus Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 Hi Pradipta..hmmm...about work ? - remove those chairs and label(caption) on the bottom (to big font I think) - make smallest, finally make bigger render and should be better. ps. sorry for my bad english ;) Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
AGmakonts Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 Share Napisano 10 Lipiec 2005 hmmmm.... give floor some bump and littlel blur reflections Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
pradipta Napisano 15 Lipiec 2005 Autor Share Napisano 15 Lipiec 2005 hindus: thanks. sure, i have just made anther test rendering and will post soon. aGmakonts: that's a good idea. i will work on that. thanks for being there, Odnośnik do komentarza Udostępnij na innych stronach More sharing options...
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