Pojazd 3D: Black Death

[STAVREV]

Black Death

[tweety]

Hey STAVREV.

Wht's this? A car with helicopters rotor? Looking good :)

Could you post some wire and view without materials?

 

Btw: it is scanline renderer?

 

Greet

 

[+]

you got'it Bro ;) :D

[STAVREV]

Bro these days i am so busy i don't know where my head is...

I had this car , but rendered bad.Tonight while sleeping i left it to render and got this...

 

I got this comercial thing,got other small thing for a local TV...

 

Sorry .... Expect wire and without materials next week...Ok BRo?

[deshu]

Sure we'll w8 for final-render version.

[alien111]

Good work :) I see similar vehicle on tv ..... maybe on discovery ... I don't know :P Waiting for final render .

[Knysha]

STAVREV - you've posted it before or am I drunk? ;]

[WToreK]

yeah - Knysha is right - deja-vu? :]

[STAVREV]

Thanks for coments guys...But why do you say waiting for final version?

 

I said next week i will send wire ,not other render.You got me wrong...This is FINAL...Yes it could be better but not now :)...

 

Knysha I have sent this car before yes but that render sucked :)

 

Thanks guys...Any crutiqes now that you know it is final?

[alien111]

If there is it final render and it is very good so :)

[STAVREV]

alien111 THANKS

 

hey guys ...I was just wondering...

 

The golden Gallery is just for Polish people ???

[slayer2004]

No. Golden Gallery is for everyone who win a challenge on this forum.

[tweety]

slayer: not necessarily. it is for really good works. something like this:

http://members.lycos.co.uk/bzykxsi/renault_fluence_final/fluence_front_m.jpg

It's Renault Fluence 2004 maded by Maciej Bąk (Bzyku). There wasn't any challenge with this car. So: Golden Gallery is for everyone who make really good stuff.

[STAVREV]

So guys what you think i should fix in this image so it becomes part of the Gallery?

[Knysha]

Emm U should master Your modeling and lightning techniques ;]

[deshu]

No. Golden Gallery is for everyone who win a challenge on this forum.

 

Dont think so... every great works may be placed in golden galery, no matter who made them. Work dont have to be challanged, to get place in GG.

 

Emm U should master Your modeling and lightning techniques ;]

Specially lightning techniques, and better materials.

 

byebye

[WToreK]

Any crutiqes now that you know it is final?

 

It sucks, dude :) Bad materials, bad lighting. Give up on this project and start something new. Learn, learn, learn :]

[STAVREV]

It sucks, dude :) Bad materials, bad lighting. Give up on this project and start something new. Learn, learn, learn :]

 

 

Wow.Thanks man.You helped me a lot....

[STAVREV]

Better RIMS?

[tweety]

what kind of renderer you used? maybe try Mental Ray?

[STAVREV]

I used Mental Ray, but have to learn lighting more.

 

If you can somehow help me in that direction please do it.After all i got 6-7 months in 3d.Still learning...

 

Have lots of tutorials about lighting.Maybe u can tell me which one helped you most to master lighting.

[Gedeon]

Interesting... And What is this?? It is a car or chelicopter ? Very beautiful...

[tweety]

analize this page:

http://www.jeffpatton.net//

it is homepage of Jeff Patton - real God of mental Ray :)

 

and some tips from me:

use only mrAreaSpot: set decay on Inverse Square and set size of arealight in AreaLightParameters

 

here you ca find some good stuff (99% in english):

http://www.max3d.pl/forum/showpost.php?p=173733&postcount=1

 

enjoy it :)

[STAVREV]

Tweety and Gedeon thanks a lot guys...

 

By the way Tweety did you see the Nike comercial?

 

I sent the link so you see it.I like to make my comercial with that NIKE STYLE.

 

by the way what is that mrAreaSpot...I work maya Tweety

[STAVREV]

i decided to make my car A HELL OF A PROJECT...

 

Wanna make it perfect...So i started with part1 - part of weapon for the car.

[Ania]

maybe you should finish yor commercial first?

you can never make something perfect, there is no perfect.

[WToreK]

You probably gonna hate me from now on (:]), but... It's not a WiP thread, ask moderator to move your work there. Hope you don't find it tough to follow forum rules.

 

about your work:

Weapon model looks good, but I'm looking forward to see some good renders, maybe fallout style (rotten metal, deserted gas station and your vechicle in the middle ;])

[STAVREV]

ania : I am workin on my comercial.But i think i will have litle time for this too...

 

WToreK , i will put lot of work on this.Hope you will be here for crutiqes:)

 

TO ADMINISTRATORS : PLEASE MOVE MY THREAD TO WIP

[STAVREV]

I changed the front...C & C welcome

[STAVREV]

Made some major changes.Don't know if u can notice...

 

I would like to hear sugestions for textures,cause i will start texturing in a few days...

[STAVREV]

I am happy to say my car got in CGUNDERGROUND HONOR GALLERY...

 

So guys please follow my thread and help me get my car in your GOLDEN GALLERY...

[tweety]

I sugest you can made some textures something like this:

you made a canon but it will better look in front of car.

 

Could you post a wire?

 

Greetz

[WToreK]

I am happy to say my car got in CGUNDERGROUND HONOR GALLERY...

 

So guys please follow my thread and help me get my car in your GOLDEN GALLERY...

 

Heh, no offence, but compare to cgunderground gallery, our golden gallery is faaar more strict about images put in there. Their gallery is much more like this thread (Finished Works 3D).

 

Good luck thou in pursuit to perfection :)

 

PS

To move your thread send PM to one of the moderators.

[Knysha]

As said before, move your thread to W.I.P section :).

About cgunderground honor gallery - n/c ;]

[STAVREV]

Well tell me one of the moderators so i send him pm...

 

Tweety thank u so much man...I like the idea

[STAVREV]

tweet here is the wire...could be better but not now...

[WToreK]

Leru, Marcin, Hindus, SansSerif - some of our mighty mods ;]]]

[STAVREV]

I read some lighting tutorials...

 

You tell me if i am geting better...

 

Don't like few things so in future excpect BETTER ONE...

 

Crutiqes welcome

[sanki]

v. nice it truly looks like toy model, as for me u could add some dirt and scratches.

[tweety]

and change your wood texture. maybe something like this:

http://www.listwy.net/panele/egger/feelwood/fw08.jpg

 

Greets

[STAVREV]

Hey tweety

 

I don't think that texture will look good with this camera.

 

That is floor.I need some modern table texture.

 

Thanks anyway Bro.Respect

[Ania]

looks better now, but the tires are too reflective, they don't look like rubber.

 

try making some difference in the texture of the rotor, not the same metal on the whole thing.

[STAVREV]

thanks...

 

Looking forward to improve myself...